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Doujinshi commentary: Dive to X999

Circle:    Arsheska Fly    Dive to X999: Front Cover
Type:   Normal, gags & serious story. 26 pages.
Date:   2000/12/29

This doujinshi starts out with several gags. After Quina and Vivi marry, a cat scratches Vivi. Quina dramatically goes into a rage, demanding what it did to hir husband, then eats the cat. Blank and Eiko wait to see who will meet Beatrix during the "love letter" sequence - and it's Garnet. (Or perhaps Beatrix just hopes it is?) There are some other cute bits that I haven't managed to interpret involving the Cleryans, Mikoto, and Eiko drawing a picture of Vivi. The serious story features Salamander and Lani in a bar. There is little dialogue, in the last one, but some outside-the-panel narration.

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